考研英语一2025年大作文真题与例文批改

一篇高分的考研英语大作文，常常具备结构清晰、句式多变、词汇地道三大特点。本文精解的2025年考研英语一批改范例，每一段都体现了这三大要素，启航教育考研英语一大作文教研组对该范文进行了详细的亮点标注。

一、考研英语一2025年大作文题目

考研英语一2025年大作文Directions:Write an essay based on the table below. In your essay, you should 1) describe the table briefly, 2) interpret the table, and 3) give your comments. Write your answer in 160-200 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)

二、考研英语一2025年大作文批改例文

The graph adove, as the specially shown, presents the statistics concerning the average number of major consuming goods of the national citizens in China in recent year. Based on the graph, the number of air conditions have increased from 75.2 to 145.9 during the years from 2014 to 2023. Meanwhile, the number of washing machines went up from 83.7 to 98.2. Obviously, it is the best way of depiction a heated topic, namely, "The live of national citizens has become increasingly better."

The phenomenon is though-provoking in several ways, but two of them are particularly significant. To start with, our society is undergoing an extensive and profound transformation. In my view, the fundamental reason of this phenomenon is the significant progress mady be China manufacturing industry in responding to there changes. In addition, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to promote economic growth and elevants purchasing power of the populace, allowing them to afford machines. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the graph is unsurprising.

What about future trends? I am confident that the number of air conditions will steadily increase in

the following decades.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：The graph adove, as the specially shown, presents the statistics concerning the average number of major consuming goods of the national citizens in China in recent year.

批改：存在拼写错误，句子优化一下The graph above presents statistics on the average ownership of major consumer goods per 100 urban households in China in recent years.

原文：onditions

批改：conditioners

原文：have

批改：has

原文： though

批改：thought-

原文：Obviously, it is the best way of depiction a heated topic, namely, "The live of national citizens has become increasingly better

批改：此句可完全删除

原文：The graph adove, as the specially shown, presents the statistics concerning the average number of major consuming goods of the national citizens in China in recent year. Based on the graph, the number of air conditions have increased from 75.2 to 145.9 during the years from 2014 to 2023. Meanwhile, the number of washing machines went up from 83.7 to 98.2. Obviously, it is the best way of depiction a heated topic, namely, "The live of national citizens has become increasingly better."

批改：描述基本上还算准确

原文：of

批改：for

原文：mady be

批改：made by

原文：elevants

批改：elevate the

原文：machines

批改：these appliances

原文：there

批改：these

原文：The phenomenon is though-provoking in several ways, but two of them are particularly significant. To start with, our society is undergoing an extensive and profound transformation. In my view, the fundamental reason of this phenomenon is the significant progress mady be China manufacturing industry in responding to there changes. In addition, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to promote economic growth and elevants purchasing power of the populace, allowing them to afford machines. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the graph is unsurprising.

批改：注意拼写错误

原文：condition

批改：conditioners

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：14分。

1. 题目要求：作文内容包含全面，主题明确，层次分明，扣分主要是拼写和第一段描述的准确性不够；

2. 语言表达：运用复杂的语法结构和高级词汇，介词短语，非谓语结构和宾语从句句型很棒；

3. 行文逻辑：采用恰当的衔接手法，行文流畅，内容连贯；

4. 建议：继续背诵，继续练习，形成自己的“万能模板”，准备迎接考试，加油！

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