考研英语一2025年大作文失分点批改

据启航教育英语教研组统计，考研英语写作模板话题连续多年成为考研英语一大作文的高频考点。本文带来的2025年考研英语一批改例文中，考生通过对社会热点的精准分析与地道表达，获得高分，其写作思路可供2027考研英语一考生直接借鉴。

一、考研英语一2025年大作文题目

考研英语一2025年大作文Directions:Write an essay based on the table below. In your essay, you should 1) describe the table briefly, 2) interpret the table, and 3) give your comments. Write your answer in 160-200 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)

二、考研英语一2025年大作文批改例文

As shown in the table, the number of air-conditions, clothes-washers and ice-freezers has been gradually increasing from 2014 to 2023. Ohviously, the table shows that lives in China of ordinary people are becoming better and better.

This phenomenon is thought-provoking in sevearl ways. but two of them are particularly significant. First and foremost, it is China who brings us into blooming. It is the Party who points at happier and more harmanious lives. Since the reform and opening up, the Party has been leading all people around the nation to reach our Chinese Dream. On top of that, with the aim of better life, we can do nothing but work harder or study harder. What we want to have only comes from our hands.

In brief, what about the trade of the table? The answer is definitely that the number will rise year by year. Only by the Party"s leading and individual efforts can we get better life.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：air-conditions

批改：应为 air conditioners（可数名词复数，无连字符）

原文： the number of

批改：此处描述三类家电的拥有量，用 the ownership of 更精准

原文：Ohviously

批改：Obviously

原文：lives in China of ordinary people

批改：语序混乱，改为 living standards of ordinary Chinese people

原文：sevearl

批改：several

批改：改为逗号

原文：who

批改：修正强调句引导词为 that

原文：who

批改：that

原文：harmanious

批改：harmonious

原文：better life

批改：a better life

原文：or

批改：并列关系，应用 and

原文：trade

批改：trade 意为 “贸易”，此处想表达 “趋势”，应为 trend

原文：better life

批改：a better life

原文：As shown in the table, the number of air-conditions, clothes-washers and ice-freezers has been gradually increasing from 2014 to 2023. Ohviously, the table shows that lives in China of ordinary people are becoming better and better.

批改：描述图片内容，符合题目要求

原文：This phenomenon is thought-provoking in sevearl ways. but two of them are particularly significant. First and foremost, it is China who brings us into blooming. It is the Party who points at happier and more harmanious lives. Since the reform and opening up, the Party has been leading all people around the nation to reach our Chinese Dream. On top of that, with the aim of better life, we can do nothing but work harder or study harder. What we want to have only comes from our hands.

批改：提出自己的观点，条理较为清晰

原文：In brief, what about the trade of the table? The answer is definitely that the number will rise year by year. Only by the Party"s leading and individual efforts can we get better life

批改：结尾段内容结构完整

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：16

这篇图表作文主题鲜明、逻辑清晰，紧扣 “家电保有量增长反映民生改善” 的核心，将国家发展、政策引领与个人努力相结合，立意积极正向，符合议论文写作要求。但存在以下需要重点改进的问题：

词汇与拼写问题突出：出现多处单词拼写错误（Ohviously/sevearl/harmanious）和词汇形式错误（air-conditions），建议写完后逐词核对，积累常见名词的标准拼写和搭配。语法与句式漏洞：强调句引导词使用错误（who/that 混淆）、主谓不一致。希望继续努力，加油！

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