考研英语二2011年大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

启航教育作为考研英语培训领域的知名品牌，每年都会整理发布当年的启航考研英语高分范文。本文呈现的2011年考研英语二大作文批改例文中，每一处失分点都已被老师精准订正，是2027考生不可错过的写作资料。

一、考研英语二2011年大作文题目

考研英语二2011年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart and 2) give your comments. You should write at least 150 words. Write your essay on ANSWER SHEET 2. (15 points)

二、考研英语二2011年大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts the changes in market shares of certain brands in the domestic car market from 2008 to 2009. In 2008, the percentage of domestic cars was approximately 25%,but by 2009, this rate had substantially risen to around 33%. In contrast, the proportion of Japanese cars experienced a significant deline of about 10% during the same period. Simultaneously, the percentage of American cars remained stable and steady. The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, Chinese society is undergoing an extensive and profound transformation. In my view, the fundamental reason for this phenomenon is the significant progress made by China"s automotive manutacturing industry in responding to these changes. In addition, against the backdrop of our country"s rapid and dynamic development, the younger gengeration, particularly those born in the 1990s and 2000s, are accustomed to using domestic cars and have become the primary consumer group.

What about future trends? I am confident that the proportion of domestic brands will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the proportion of Japanese brands and American brands will likely continue to decrease.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：The bar chart clearly depicts the changes in market shares of certain brands in the domestic car market from 2008 to 2009. In 2008, the percentage of domestic cars was approximately 25%,but by 2009, this rate had substantially risen to around 33%. In contrast, the proportion of Japanese cars experienced a significant deline of about 10% during the same period. Simultaneously, the percentage of American cars remained stable and steady.

批改：用具体数据描述图表内容，清晰直观

原文：manutacturing

批改：manufacturing

原文：gengeration

批改：generation

原文：The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, Chinese society is undergoing an extensive and profound transformation. In my view, the fundamental reason for this phenomenon is the significant progress made by China"s automotive manutacturing industry in responding to these changes. In addition, against the backdrop of our country"s rapid and dynamic development, the younger gengeration, particularly those born in the 1990s and 2000s, are accustomed to using domestic cars and have become the primary consumer group.

批改：以分论点的形式论述这一现象背后的原因。作文建议采取三段式，不要把所有内容都堆砌在一段，会导致重点不突出，结构不清晰

原文：What about future trends? I am confident that the proportion of domestic brands will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the proportion of Japanese brands and American brands will likely continue to decrease.

批改：总结全文，升华主题，展望未来，立意深远。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：13 /15

作文建议采取三段式，不要把所有内容都堆砌在一段，会导致重点不突出，结构不清晰。

词汇：考试时可以多积累高级词汇，写作文就能用上，但尤其注意单词拼写不要出现明显错误，特别是与主题词相关的单词要重点留意。

内容：在第二段分析原因时，我们可以有两个选择，一是只分析中国品牌占比上升的原因，二是可以加上日本品牌占比下降的原因，关于日本品牌占比下降的原因，可以写日本品牌一些不当行为导致其声誉下降，进而影响其销量等原因。

整体来看，主要是单词拼写细节错误，但要多用自己的语言去进行表达，避免和范文重复，后续继续注重练习，加油！

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