2024年考研英语二大作文实例分析与批改

2024年考研英语二大作文围绕哪一类话题命题？本文精选的范文聚焦考研英语二写作冲刺话题方向，结合启航教育多年考研英语二教学沉淀，从描述图表、解读寓意到发表评论三大角度，完整呈现高分作文的内在结构。

一、2024年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2024年大作文Directions:Write an essay based on the chart below. In your essay, you should1) describe and interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments. Write your answer in about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2024年考研英语二大作文批改例文

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必须使用黑色字迹书写:在答题卡区域向作答,超出黑色矩形边框限定区域的答案无效,

The bar above clearly illustrates the data of students" main gains in the labor pratice course in a certain univers-ity. Overall acquiring relevant knowledge has the largest proportain, at 913%, followed by enhancing labor skills, feeling relaxed, and improving cooperation skills, which account for 84.8%, 594%, and 32.6% res pectively

This phenomenon can be attributed to three reasons. First and formost. the main purpose of the labor pratice course is to provide students with learning opportunities. to apply the knowledge they have acquired in pratice. Besides, students may encounter various challenges in pratice process However, after overcoming difficulties and completing tasks they can experience a sense of achievement and satifaction. Additionally, labor pratice courses often involve team collab-oration, which may explain why some students learn how to cooperate with others effectively

As has been discussed above, we could draw the conclusion that with the rapid development of China, there will still be owing to all the benefits that labor pratice courses can bring. an increasing number of college students are going to take such lessons

必须使用黑色字迹书写:在答题卡区域内作答,超出黑色矩形边框限定区域的答案无效!

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三、考研英语作文批改

原文：pratice course in a certain univers-ity. Overall acquiring relevant knowledge

批改：pratice-> practice​ (拼写错误) univers-ity-> university​ (拼写错误) proportain-> proportion​ (拼写错误) 913%-> 91.3%​ (数据笔误) 594%-> 54.4%​ (数据笔误) res pectively-> respectively​ (拼写错误)

原文：r above clearly illustrates the data of students" main gains in the labor pratice course in a certain univers-ity. Overall acquiring relevant knowledge has the largest proportain, at 913%, followed by enhancing labor skills, feeling relaxed, and improving cooperation skills, which account for 84.8%, 594%, and 32.6% res pectively

批改：第一段成功列出了图表中的核心数据，并且用“Overall”进行了很好的概括

原文：First and formost. the main purpose of the labor pratice course is to provide students with learning opportunities. to apply the knowledge they have acquired in pratice. Besides, students may encounter various challenges in pratice process However, after overcoming d

批改：formost-> foremost​ (拼写错误) pratice-> practice​ (拼写错误) satifaction-> satisfaction​ (拼写错误) collab-oration-> collaboration​ (拼写错误)

原文：henomenon can be attributed to three reasons. First and formost. the main purpose of the labor pratice course is to provide students with learning opportunities. to apply the knowledge they have acquired in pratice. Besides, students may encounter various challenges in pratice process However, after overcoming difficulties and completing tasks they can experience a sense of achievement and satifaction. Additionally, labor pratice courses often involve team collab-oration, which may explain why some students learn how to cooperate with others effectively

批改：本段的论证框架非常好，从课程目的、成就感和团队合作三个角度分析原因，思路清晰，并且每个原因都紧密联系了图表中的具体收获，逻辑链条非常扎实！这是很大的优点。可以进一步提升的地方是句与句之间的衔接，比如在“遇到挑战”和“获得成就感”之间，可以加一个“but”或“yet”让转折更自然。

原文：we could draw the conclusion that with the rapid development of China, there will still be owing to all the benefits that labor pratice courses can bring. an increasing number of college students are goi

批改：we could draw-> we can draw​ (时态统一) there will still be owing to all the benefits that labor pratice courses can bring. an increasing number...-> 此句语序混乱，调整后逻辑更通顺：an increasing number of college students are going to take such lessons, owing to all the benefits that labor practice courses can bring. lesson-> courses​ (用词一致性，前文均为courses)

原文：s been discussed above, we could draw the conclusion that with the rapid development of China, there will still be owing to all the benefits that labor pratice courses can bring. an increasing number of college students are going to take such lessons

批改：结尾段总结了观点并预测了趋势，这很好

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：11

同学，你这篇作文最突出的优点是论证思路清晰、逻辑链条扎实，每个原因都紧密扣合图表数据，这非常可贵！根据评分标准，它较好地完成了试题规定的任务。

当前，影响得分的主要因素是语言的准确性，特别是拼写错误和个别笔误。

我为你提供一个非常具体且重要的建议：

建立“高频错词清单”并仔细检查数据。​ 请将你在练习中反复出错的词（如 practice/ proportion/satisfaction等）专门记录下来，在写作和检查时特别留意。同时，在描述数据后，花几秒钟快速核对一遍数字，确保准确。这个小习惯能帮你迅速解决大部分基础语法问题，从而将重点转向思路和表达的提升。

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