考研英语二2011年大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

历年考研英语大作文命题往往聚焦社会、经济、文化与教育等核心话题。本文精解的2011年考研英语二真题，正是考研英语写作冲刺常考方向中的代表题。透过启航老师逐段批注，可帮助考生建立稳定的写作思路。

一、考研英语二2011年大作文题目

考研英语二2011年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart and 2) give your comments. You should write at least 150 words. Write your essay on ANSWER SHEET 2. (15 points)

二、考研英语二2011年大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts the proportion of some car brands in the market in China from 2008 to 2009. In 2008, the percentage of Chinese brands was approximately 26 %, but by 2009, this rate had substantially risen to around 34%. In contrast, the proportion of Japanese brands experienced a significant decline about 8% during the same period. Simultaneously, the percentage of American brands remained stable and steady.

The core reason of the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, Chinese society is undergoing an extensive and profound transformation. In my view, the fundamental reason of this phenomenon is the significant progress made by China’ s manufacturing industry in responding to these changes. In addition, against the backdrop of our country’ s rapid and dynamic development, the younger generation, particularly those born in the 1990s and 2000s, are accustomed to using domestic brands and have become the primary consumer group. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

What is more? I am confident that the proportion of Chinese brands will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the proportion of foreign brands will likely continue to decrease.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：market in China

批改：改为 domestic market 国内市场

批改：语法正确

批改：语法正确

批改：开头段表达不错，清晰地阐述了图表内容

原文：reason

批改：下列有几个原因，此处为复数，改为 reasons

批改：语法正确，表达也很好

批改：语法正确

批改：内容表达很好，也很具体

原文：?

批改：此处为逗号

批改：结尾段内容表达很好

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：12分/ 15分

题目要求：总体上来说是切题的，表明的个人观点与图表的内容是贴合的

语言表达：存在几处细节表达问题，词汇表达不错，一些句式表达也很好

结构逻辑：文章的结构完整清晰，内容也比较丰富具体

修改建议：1. 语法问题结合作文批注仔细修改，要细心 2. 标点使用要规范，之后可以多积累素材，自己多练练句子，进一步丰富自己的句式和观点储备，提高自己的语言表达，总的来说写的不错，加油！

很多考研英语考生都遇到过写作时思路枯竭、句式单一的问题，本文精解的2011年考研英语二范文正是突破这一瓶颈的优质范本。启航教育写作主讲会针对考研英语二常考话题逐一拆解，让考研英语写作冲刺写作变得有迹可循。