考研英语二2011年大作文写作方向与示例

启航教育在考研英语写作教学中反复强调：词汇与句式的高级化是考研英语作文高分的关键。本文整理的2011年考研英语二批改范例，几乎每一段都包含高分替换词与衔接词，是考研英语二大作文写作锦囊中的代表性范文。

一、考研英语二2011年大作文题目

考研英语二2011年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart and 2) give your comments. You should write at least 150 words. Write your essay on ANSWER SHEET 2. (15 points)

二、考研英语二2011年大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts the change in market shares of some certain brands in domestic car market from 2008 to 2009. In 2008, the percentage of domestic brands was approximately 25%, but by 2009, this rate had substantially risen to around 32%. In contrast, the proportion of Japanese brands experienced a significant decline of about 10% during the same period. Simultaneously, the percentage of American brands remained stable and steady.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to elevate the quality of domestic cars, allowing people to choose domestic cars rather than imported cars. In addition, Chinese society is undergoing an extensive and profound transformation. In my view, the fundamental reason for this phenomenon is the significant progress made by China’s automotive industry in responding to these changes. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

What about future trends? I am confident that the proportion of domestic brands is a clear sign of social improvement and will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the proportion of Japanese and American brands will likely continue to decrease.

三、考研英语作文批改

批改：语法正确

原文：some certain

批改：some 和 certain 重复表达了，删去一个

原文：in

批改：此处特指国内汽车市场，改为 in the

批改：语法正确

批改：语法正确

批改：开头段表达不错，清晰地阐述了图表内容

批改：语法正确

批改：语法正确，表达也不错

批改：语法正确

批改：内容表达很好，也很具体

批改：语法正确

批改：结尾段表达很好

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：13分/ 15分

题目要求：总体上来说是切题的，表明的个人观点与图表的内容是贴合的

语言表达：存在几处语法问题，词汇表达不错，一些句式表达也很好

结构逻辑：文章的结构完整清晰，内容也比较丰富具体

修改建议：语法问题结合作文批注仔细修改，要细心，之后可以多积累素材，自己多练练句子，进一步丰富自己的句式和观点储备，提高自己的语言表达，总的来说写的不错，加油！

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