2014年考研英语二大作文失分点批改

本文是一份经过启航教育整理的2014年考研英语二大作文批改资料，对照考研英语作文万能句型写作框架与评分标准进行精细讲解。无论是词汇句式、段落衔接还是逻辑展开，本文都能为考研英语考生提供可直接套用的范例。

一、2014年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2014年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should1) interpret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

二、2014年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts the changes in wrban and rural population in china over a period of 20 years. In 1990, the urban population was about 300 million, but by 2010, this figure had substantially risen to 666 million. In contrast, the rural population experienced a slow decline about 160 million during the same period.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, in the wake of the high-speed advancement of society, rural resident are no longer content with more material satisfaction, they also pursue a high quality of life. This explains why an increasing number of them chose to live in cities. In addition, an increasing number of young people in countryside realise that in modern society full of changes, challenges and chances, working in big cities is vital if they wish to achieve successin the long run. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

What about future trends? I am confident that the number of urban population is a clear sign of social improvement and will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the number ofrural population will likely continue to decrease.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：wrban

批改：urban

原文：china

批改：专有名词首字母要大写

批改：语法正确

批改：开头段表达不错，清晰地阐述了图表内容

批改：语法正确

原文：resident

批改：此处为名词复数，改为 residents

原文：they

批改：逗号不能连接两个完整的句子，此处要加连接词，改为 and they

原文： chose

批改：用一般现在时即可，改为 choose

原文：successin

批改：记得加空格 success in

批改：内容表达不错，也比较具体

原文：ofrural

批改：两个单词之间加空格

批改：结尾段内容表达很好

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：11分/ 15分

题目要求：总体上来说是切题的，表明的个人观点与图表的内容是贴合的

语言表达：存在几处语法和拼写问题，词汇表达不错，一些句式表达也很好

结构逻辑：文章的结构完整清晰，内容也比较丰富具体

修改建议：1. 语法问题结合作文批注仔细修改 2. 拼写要细心，之后可以多积累素材，自己多练练句子，进一步丰富自己的句式和观点储备，提高自己的语言表达，总的来说写的不错，加油！

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