2014年考研英语二大作文真题与例文批改

启航教育考研英语教研组精心筛选了2014年考研英语二大作文真题原文及高分批改范例。本篇范文中，老师对每一句都给出修改建议，是考研英语二大作文备考资料库中的精品，特别推荐给参加2027考研的学子。

一、2014年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2014年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should1) interpret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

二、2014年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts the changes of population among urban and rural area in the last two decades. In 1990, the number of urban population was 300 million, but by 2010, this figure had substantially risen to 666 million. In contrast, the number of rural population had experienced a significant decline of 160 million during the same period.

The core reasons for this observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to build a sound modernizing systom, enabling the corporations to have more opportunies for offering job vacance and appealing people to looking for a job with higher salary. In addition, against the backdrop of our country"s rapid and dynamic development, the young generation, particularly those born in 1990s and 2000s, are accostomed to living and working in the city, and has become the pillar of modernizing process. Considering these factors, the observed phenomenon is unsuprising.

What about future trends? I belive that the increase of urban population is a clear sign of improvement and will continue to increase in the following decades. In contrast, the number of rural population will remained stable relatively.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：changes of

批改：搭配错误（应为 “changes in”）

原文：among

批改：用词不当（两者之间用 “between”）

原文：area

批改： 应为复数 “areas”

原文：modernizing systom

批改：拼写错误（应为 “modern industrial system”）

原文：opportunies

批改： 拼写错误（应为 “opportunities”）

原文：vacance

批改： 拼写错误（应为 “vacancies”）

原文：appealing people to looking for

批改： 语法错误（应为 “attracting people to look for”）

原文：the

批改：删去

原文：higher salary

批改：应为复数 “higher salaries”

原文：born in 1990s and 2000s

批改：缺少定冠词（应为 “born in the 1990s and 2000s”）

原文：accostomed

批改：拼写错误（应为 “accustomed”）

原文：has become

批改：主谓不一致（主语为复数 “the young generation”，应为 “have become”）

原文：unsuprising

批改：拼写错误（应为 “unsurprising”）

原文：belive

批改：拼写错误（应为 “believe”）

原文： the increase of urban population is a clear sign of improvement and will continue to increase

批改：语义重复（应为 “the urban population will continue to grow”）

原文：will remained

批改：语法错误（应为 “will remain”）

原文：The bar chart clearly depicts the changes of population among urban and rural area in the last two decades. In 1990, the number of urban population was 300 million, but by 2010, this figure had substantially risen to 666 million. In contrast, the number of rural population had experienced a significant decline of 160 million during the same period.

批改：描述图表内容，符合题目要求

原文：The core reasons for this observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to build a sound modernizing systom, enabling the corporations to have more opportunies for offering job vacance and appealing people to looking for a job with higher salary. In addition, against the backdrop of our country"s rapid and dynamic development, the young generation, particularly those born in 1990s and 2000s, are accostomed to living and working in the city, and has become the pillar of modernizing process. Considering these factors, the observed phenomenon is unsuprising

批改：提出了自己的观点，使用了表示逻辑关系的连接词，条理清晰

原文：What about future trends? I belive that the increase of urban population is a clear sign of improvement and will continue to increase in the following decades. In contrast, the number of rural population will remained stable relatively.

批改：预测了未来的趋势，符合结尾段的内容和结构

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：10

这篇图表分析文框架完整，能准确捕捉 “1990-2010 年城镇人口激增、农村人口下降” 的核心趋势，但存在较多的问题：拼写错误频发（如 “systom”“accostomed”“unsuprising”），语法与搭配错误突出。加强单词和语法的背诵，再细心一点，希望继续努力，加油！

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