2014年考研英语二大作文写作方向与示例

当你坐在考研英语二考场，面对2014年大作文题目的那一瞬间，是否能快速组织起一篇结构清晰、表达地道的高分文章？本文这篇批改例文，正是考研英语二真题话题下的标准范本，适合每一位考研英语备考生反复研读。

一、2014年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2014年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should1) interpret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

二、2014年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts the change of Chinese people about city and village in twenty years. In1990，the number of city people was 300 million, but by 2010, this figure had substantially risen to 666 million. In meanwhile, the number of village people experienced a slow decline of 160 million during the same period.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, the city is provide younger people with an opportunity to work and help people forster a deeper understanding of world. In additon, in the wake of the hing speed advancement of society, people"s live ways have undergone significant changes, people are no longer content with were moterial satisfaction; they also pursue spiritual enjoyment.

what about future trends? I am confident that the number of city people will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrase, the number of village people will likely remain relatively stable.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文： In meanw

批改：In meanwhile -> Meanwhile (固定搭配，不需要介词 In)

原文：e bar chart clearly depicts the change of Chinese people about city and village in twenty years. In1990，the number of city people was 300 million, but by 2010, this figure had substantially risen to 666 million. In meanwhile, the number of village people experienced a slow decline of 160 million during the same period.

批改：本段准确地呈现了核心数据，完成了图表描述的任务

原文：he city is provid

批改：the city is provide -> cities provide (语法错误，删掉 is)

原文：orster a deeper understanding of world

批改：forster -> foster (拼写错误) of world -> of the world (缺少定冠词 the)

原文： additon

批改：In additon -> In addition (拼写错误) hing speed -> high-speed (拼写错误)

原文：were moterial satisfa

批改：were moterial satisfaction -> mere material satisfaction (were 是语法错误，应为 mere“仅仅的”；moterial 是 material 的拼写错误)

原文：he core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, the city is provide younger people with an opportunity to work and help people forster a deeper understanding of world. In additon, in the wake of the hing speed advancement of society, people"s live ways have undergone significant changes, people are no longer content with were moterial satisfaction; they also pursue spiritual enjoyment.

批改：第一个论点提到“加深对世界的理解”，这与人口迁移的直接关联性不强，可以更直接地聚焦于“就业机会”和“个人发展”。 第二个论点从“物质到精神追求”的转变，角度很好，但逻辑可以更紧扣“城市化”：即城市能更好地满足这些精神需求（如文化、娱乐）。

原文：hat ab

批改：what -> What (句首字母应大写)

原文：contrase, t

批改：In contrase -> In contrast (拼写错误)

原文：hat about future trends? I am confident that the number of city people will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrase, the number of village people will likely remain relatively stable.

批改：结尾段清晰地给出了预测

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：10分

同学，你好！这篇作文表明你已经很好地掌握了图表作文的写作框架，并且能够提出相关的论点，这是非常宝贵的能力。

1. 语言方面：

当前的主要挑战在于语言的准确性与严谨性。文中出现了一些拼写错误和语法错误，这影响了文章的专业度。同时，将口语化的表达（如city people）变为（urban residents），将是快速提分的关键。请务必在完稿后留出时间专门检查这些细节。

2. 结构方面：

你的三段式结构非常清晰。在内容上，可以进一步提升论证的精准度。确保每一个论点都直接、有力地回答“为什么人们会从农村迁往城市”？例如，将“理解世界”具体化为“在城市有更广阔的职业发展平台和视野”，会让逻辑链条更紧密。

总的修改建议：

请熟练掌握并使用 urban, rural, population, residents 等核心词汇，确保拼写无误。

让每个原因都紧扣“人口迁移”这个核心。多问自己一句：“这个原因是如何直接促使人们做出搬家决定的？”

仔细校对：养成检查的习惯，重点关注拼写、冠词和主谓一致等常见错误。

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