2014年考研英语二大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

对于考研英语一而言，2014年大作文常以图画形式呈现。本文精解的这篇图画批改范例，启航教育老师逐句解读图画细节、寓意提炼与评论展开三步走，是考研英语作文万能句型图画作文的经典教学样本。

一、2014年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2014年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should1) interpret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

二、2014年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts the change of number of population of urban and rural in China in 20 years. In 1990,the number of population of urban was 300 million, but by 2010, this figure had substantially risen to 666 million.Meanwhile, the number of population of rural experienced a significant decline of 160 million during the same period.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with,against the backdrop of our country"s rapid and dynamic development,the younger generation,particularly those norn in the 1990s and 2000s,are accustomed to living in the downtown and have become the primary resident group.In addition,an increasing number of young people believe that in modern society full of changes,challenges and chances,integrity is indispensable if they wish to achieve success in the long run.Considering these factors,the depicts phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

What about future trends?I am confident that the number of population of urban will steadily increase in the following decades.In contrast,the number of population of rural will likely continue to decrease.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：rban and rura

批改：这俩 都是adj，后要加名词，urban and rural areas

原文：lation of ur

批改：urban population即可

原文：opulation of rur

批改：rural population即可

原文：million.Meanwhile, the number of population of rural experienced a significant decline of 160 million during the same

批改：描述图表还是比较到位的，数据清楚明确，句子结构完整，但是一些表述不是很到位哦，注意修改哦

原文：orn

批改：born

原文：egr

批改：这里好像逻辑不对，正直善良与题目人口变化无关呀，改为more job opportunities are

原文：icts

批改：depicted

原文：our country"s rapid and dynamic development,the younger generation,particularly those norn in the 1990s and 2000s,are accustomed to living in the downtown and have become the primary resident group.In addition,an increasing number of young people believe that in modern society full of changes,challenges and chances,integrity is indispensable if they wish to achieve success in the long run.Considering these factors,the depicts phenomenon in the chart is unsurprisin

批改：原因分析和现象解释还是比较到位的，句子结构合理，完整，但是有一些小错误注意修改哦。

原文：tion of urb

批改：urban population

原文：ulation of rural

批改：rural population

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：10/15

语法：语法注意表述的严谨性，of结构要注意使用，有的adj后面直接加名词，无需用of结构。

逻辑：整体逻辑可以的，整体很通顺。

词汇：单词整体还行，也有写错的哦，注意修改。

内容：内容比较符合题意要求，结构合理。

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