2014年考研英语二大作文实例分析与批改

备战2014年考研英语大作文，先从研读经典高分范文开始。本文汇集的启航教育批改范文中，不仅有原文、批注，还有词汇注释与亮点解析。准备2027考研的同学，可联系启航教育在线咨询考研英语二写作高分规划。

一、2014年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2014年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should1) interpret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

二、2014年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The line chart clealy depicts the change of population in urban area and rural area during 1990 to 2010. In 1990, the number of rural population was 834 billion, but by 2010, this figure had substantially decrease to 674 billion. In contrast, the number of urban area experienced a significant increase of 366 billion during the same period.

The core reason for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our goverment has made tremendous efforts to build a sound urbanization system, enabling people to have ample opportunities for further future. In addition, Chinese sociey is undergoing an extensive and profound transformation. In my view, the fundamental reason for this phenomenon is the significant progress made by China"s ecnomic condition in responding to these changes. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

What about future trends? I am confident that the number of urban population will steadily increase in the following dacades. In contrast, the number of rural population will likely continue to decarease relatively stable.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：line

批改：bar柱状图

原文：clealy

批改：clearly

原文：during

批改：from

原文：decrease

批改：decreased

原文：area

批改：population

原文：billion

批改：单位是百万million

原文：billion

批改：million

原文：billion

批改：million

原文：he line chart clealy depicts the change of population in urban area and rural area during 1990 to 2010. In 1990, the number of rural population was 834 billion, but by 2010, this figure had substantially decrease to 674 billion. In contrast, the number of urban area experienced a significant increase of 366 billion during the same period.

批改：能够清晰的描绘图表中展现的内容，内容完整，注意避免小的语言错误。

原文：reason

批改：复数

原文：goverment

批改：government

原文：The core reason for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our goverment has made tremendous efforts to build a sound urbanization system, enabling people to have ample opportunities for further future. In addition, Chinese sociey is undergoing an extensive and profound transformation. In my view, the fundamental reason for this phenomenon is the significant progress made by China"s ecnomic condition in responding to these changes. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

批改：能够具体阐释出图表背后的真实意义，能够运用逻辑关系词连接句子，使得句与句之间衔接连贯，望继续保持。

原文：What about future trends? I am confident that the number of urban population will steadily increase in the following dacades. In contrast, the number of rural population will likely continue to decarease relatively stable.

批改：分析并预测了未来的趋势，言简意赅。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：10/15

1）内容符合题目的要求，能够准确全面的描绘出图表中的内容。

2）词汇方面，基础词汇一定要避免拼写错误，名词单复数要使用正确；句式方面，能够运用一些复杂句式，句型结构灵活多变；语法方面，注意动词过去分词的变化。

3）逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，符合英语句子结构的要求。

4）修改建议：可以看出作文完成的很认真，内容充分，语言逻辑清晰，值得表扬。一定要细心一些，注意避免以上小的细节问题，要看好图表的单位。再接再厉。

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