In effect,it ’s extremely crucial and valuable to know and preserve our goals and favorite habits.A case in point is

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In effect,it ’s extremely crucial and valuable to know and preserve our goals and favorite habits.A case in point is me.I have been exceedingly fond of swimming that brings me confidence and arouse my keen on life ,even my friends consider it as a boring activity.这句话有问题吗

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答：有几个问题。（1） preserve our goals改成maintain our goals 坚持我们的目标（preserve 保持，维持……的原状，不能和goal搭配） （2） arouse 改成arouses （主语是swimming,保持主谓一致）（3）my keen on life 可以改成my enthusiasm for life (keen是一个形容词，在这里不能使用）（4）even 改成even though (这里需要一个连词连接前后两句，even不能作连词; even though 是连词，意思是：尽管，虽然）