2014年考研英语二大作文写作方向与示例

作为考研英语备考的核心模块，2014年考研英语二大作文承载了大量学生的提分期待。本文带来的这篇批改例文，紧扣考研英语二作文范文常见话题，由启航教育资深英语教研团队逐句批改，详细标注语法、词汇与逻辑三大失分点，是考研英语写作提分的优质资料。

一、2014年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2014年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should1) interpret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

二、2014年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chort clearly depicts the change of urban and rural people"s amount from 1990 to 2010. In 1990, the number of urban people was 300 million, but by 2010, it had substantially increased by 366 million. In contrast, the rural people had experienced a significant decrease by 160 million during the same period.

The core reavons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of change, our government has made tremendous efforts to drive economic growth and elevate the purchasing power of populate, enabling them to afford urhan houses that were lutury. In addition,against the backdrop of economical growth, people are no longer content with material satisfaction, they also purste spiritual enjoyment. That’s why an increasing number of people start to live in cities. Considering these factor. the dbserved phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

What about future trends? I"m confident that the number of urban people will increase constantly in the following decades. In contrast, the number of rural people will continue to decrease.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文： bar chort

批改：bar chart

原文：amount

批改：amount 用于不可数名词，改为“urban and rural populations”

原文：urban people

批改：可数集合名词，常用 "urban population" 或 "urban residents"

原文： rural people

批改：可数集合名词，常用 "rural population" 或 "rural residents"

原文：reavons

批改：reasons

原文： populate

批改：population

原文：rhan

批改：urban

原文：lutury

批改：a luxury

原文：economical

批改：economic

原文：purste

批改：pursue

原文：people are no longer content with material satisfaction, they also purste spiritual enjoyment

批改：同上，逗号前后是完整句子，用and连接

原文：factor

批改：factors

批改：逗号

原文：dbserved

批改：observed

原文：onstantly

批改：constantly意为含“不间断”，改为 steadily

原文：urban people

批改：同上

原文：The bar chort clearly depicts the change of urban and rural people"s amount from 1990 to 2010. In 1990, the number of urban people was 300 million, but by 2010, it had substantially increased by 366 million. In contrast, the rural people had experienced a significant decrease by 160 million during the same period.

批改：抓住“城镇升、乡村降”主线。但是要注意一些集合名词的使用

原文：The core reavons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of change, our government has made tremendous efforts to drive economic growth and elevate the purchasing power of populate, enabling them to afford urhan houses that were lutury. In addition,against the backdrop of economical growth, people are no longer content with material satisfaction, they also purste spiritual enjoyment. That’s why an increasing number of people start to live in cities. Considering these factor. the dbserved phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

批改：用“政府经济拉动+精神需求”双因解释，思路合理

原文：What about future trends? I"m confident that the number of urban people will increase constantly in the following decades. In contrast, the number of rural people will continue to decrease.

批改：预测未来趋势

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：7/15

1.题目要求：字数符合题目要求。文章需要分析图表并写出自己的观点，符合题目要求。

2.语言表达：语言表达清晰。但存在较多拼写问题和语法错误，考生需要多加注意。

3.内容层面：文章的结构清晰，有明确的开头、中间和结尾，逻辑连贯。

4.修改意见：这篇文章有效地分析了图表信息，并提供了原因和未来趋势的预测。存在较多拼写问题和语法错误，建议考生学习常用的英语词汇、短语及语法（如一句话只能有一个主、谓等），在写作时认真检查，注意语法和单词的准确性。

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