2014年考研英语二大作文失分点批改

据启航教育英语教研组统计，考研英语作文批改话题连续多年成为考研英语二大作文的高频考点。本文带来的2014年考研英语二批改例文中，考生通过对社会热点的精准分析与地道表达，获得高分，其写作思路可供2027考研英语二考生直接借鉴。

一、2014年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2014年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should1) interpret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

二、2014年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart cleally depicts the variety of Chinese urban population and rural population in twenty years. In 1990, the number of urban population was 300 millions but by 2010, this figure has substantially risen to 666 millions. In contrast, the number of rural population experienced a significant decline of 160 millions. from 1990-2010.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be Summarized as follows. To start with, As the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous effort to build a sound social sustem, drive economic growth andelevate the income of the populace. allowing them to embrace more modernized" Society.

In addition, chinese society is under going an extensive and profound transfromation, In my view, the fundamental reason for this phenonmenon is the significant progress made by China"s ecomicedevelopment in responding to these changes

what about the future trends? I am confident that the number of urban population crear sign of social development will steadily inclease in the following decades. In contrast, the number of rural population will likely to decrease.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：in twenty years.

批改：表示二十年后，把in改成during

批改：加逗号断句

原文：millions

批改：million

原文：millions

批改：million

原文：millions

批改：million

原文：-

批改：用to

原文：The bar chart cleally depicts the variety of Chinese urban population and rural population in twenty years. In 1990, the number of urban population was 300 millions but by 2010, this figure has substantially risen to 666 millions. In contrast, the number of rural population experienced a significant decline of 160 millions. from 1990-2010.

批改：注意：数字+hundred，thousand，million和billion，用单数，不需要加s 能够清晰的描绘图表中展现的内容，内容完整，注意避免小的语言错误。

原文：Summarized

批改：首字母小写

原文：As

批改：小写

原文：effort

批改：复数

原文：sustem

批改：system

批改：逗号

原文：chinese

批改：专有名词首字母大写

原文：under going

批改：undergoing是一个单词，不要分开

原文：,

批改：句号

原文：ecomice

批改：economic

原文：The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be Summarized as follows. To start with, As the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous effort to build a sound social sustem, drive economic growth andelevate the income of the populace. allowing them to embrace more modernized" Society. In addition, chinese society is under going an extensive and profound transfromation, In my view, the fundamental reason for this phenonmenon is the significant progress made by China"s ecomicedevelopment in responding to these changes

批改：能够运用逻辑关系词对图表中的现象进行分析论述，注意避免小的语言错误。

原文：what

批改：what首字母大写

批改：加is a

原文：crear

批改：clear

批改：加上：and it

原文：inclease

批改：increase

批改：加be

原文：t about the future trends? I am confident that the number of urban population crear sign of social development will steadily inclease in the following decades. In contrast, the number of rural population will likely to decrease.

批改：分析并预测了未来的趋势，言简意赅。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：8/15

1）内容符合题目的要求，能够准确全面的描绘出图表中的内容。

2）词汇方面，基础词汇一定要避免拼写错误，名词单复数要使用正确，国家名作为专有名词首字母要大写；句式方面，能够运用一些复杂句式，句型结构灵活多变，但是要注意句子结构的完整，不要缺少成分；

3）逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，符合英语句子结构的要求。

4）修改建议：可以看出作文完成的比较认真，内容充分，语言逻辑清晰，值得表扬。一定要细心一些，注意避免以上小的细节问题。再接再厉。

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