2013年考研英语二大作文真题与例文批改

考研英语二大作文每年的命题都会折射出当年的社会热点。本文呈现的2013年考研英语二批改范例，从生活实际出发，紧扣命题意图。启航教育老师在批注中详细指出了图（表）描述、原因分析与建议评论的合理答题节奏。

一、2013年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2013年大作文Directions:Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments. You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2013年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts the part-time job situations of students at a certain university. In the freshman year, the proportion of taking part-time jobs was 66.77%, but by the junior year, this rate had gradually risen to 71.93%. In contrast, the percentage of taking part-time jobs experienced a significant increase of 16.31% from the junior year to the senior year.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to promote cooperation between universities and enterprises, enabling more and more university students to find suitable part-time jobs. In addition,

as the saying goes,"On life"s stage, pressure is always present." Nowadays, many university students are compelled to confront immense economic pressure, and as a result, taking part-time jobs has emerged as their significant choice for utilizing leisure time. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

What about future trends? I am confident that the proportion of taking part-time jobs is a clear sign of social improvement and will steadily increase in the following decades.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：The bar chart clearly depicts the part-time job situations of students at a certain university. In the freshman year, the proportion of taking part-time jobs was 66.77%, but by the junior year, this rate had gradually risen to 71.93%. In contrast, the percentage of taking part-time jobs experienced a significant increase of 16.31% from the junior year to the senior year.

批改：能够准确地描绘出图表的信息，句子连贯完整。

原文：The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to promote cooperation between universities and enterprises, enabling more and more university students to find suitable part-time jobs. In addition, as the saying goes,"On life"s stage, pressure is always present." Nowadays, many university students are compelled to confront immense economic pressure, and as a result, taking part-time jobs has emerged as their significant choice for utilizing leisure time. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

批改：能够细致分析图表中现象产生的原因，句子结构连贯完整。

原文：What about future trends? I am confident that the proportion of taking part-time jobs is a clear sign of social improvement and will steadily increase in the following decades.

批改：分析并预测了未来的趋势，言简意赅。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：13/15

1）内容符合题目的要求，能够准确全面的描绘出图表中的内容。

2）词汇方面，无拼写错误；句式方面，能够运用一些复杂句式，句型结构灵活多变；语法方面，总体来看语法基础没有问题。

3）逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，符合英语句子结构的要求。

4）修改建议：可以看出作文完成的很认真，内容充分，语言逻辑清晰，值得表扬。

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