考研英语一2017年大作文怎么写？附例文批改

正在备考考研英语的你，是否还在为2017年考研英语一大作文的写法犯愁？本文精选一篇高分组同学的批改例文，系统梳理考研英语作文话题的常考话题与写作框架。透过启航教育老师的逐段点评，你能直观感受高分作文的得分诀窍。

一、考研英语一2017年大作文题目

考研英语一2017年大作文52. Directions: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following pictures. In your essay, you should1) describe the pictures briefly, 2) interpret the meaning, and 3) give your comments. You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)

二、考研英语一2017年大作文批改例文

The left image is of a person lounging around with a full bookshelf, satisfied with the large volume of books he possesses. The person in the right image is actively reading a book and plans to finish twenty books within the year. The caption reads, "Having Books vs. Reading Books."

Among many themes, this cartoon highlights the importance of action and the common pitfall of complacency. Complacency can manifest in different forms and severities and is a phenomenon. that arguably everyone experiences. It is a widely overlooked issue due to its ability to also create a false sense of achievement. Suggested in the left panel is a person who is complacent experiencing an illusion of accomplishment merely by owning lots of books. Evidently, complacency is a peril to individuals and societies alike, impeding their progress.

Overcoming complacency requires first recognizing it, which necessitates education on the phenomenon. Deliberate action should then be undertaken to stimulate meaningful progress. as represented by the right panel. There is no question that growth is a necessary element to a fulfilling life and the very reason that we humans work and advance our societies. As such, complacency must go and action must continue.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：The left image is of a person lounging around with a full bookshelf, satisfied with the large volume of books he possesses. The person in the right image is actively reading a book and plans to finish twenty books within the year. The caption reads, "Having Books vs. Reading Books."

批改：对漫画内容描述的很全面，语言连贯。

原文：Among many themes, this cartoon highlights the importance of action and the common pitfall of complacency. Complacency can manifest in different forms and severities and is a phenomenon. that arguably everyone experiences. It is a widely overlooked issue due to its ability to also create a false sense of achievement. Suggested in the left panel is a person who is complacent experiencing an illusion of accomplishment merely by owning lots of books. Evidently, complacency is a peril to individuals and societies alike, impeding their progress.

批改：该段落能够将图画背后蕴含的真实意义加以阐述，语言衔接连贯。

批改：这两句是一句话，改成逗号

原文：Overcoming complacency requires first recognizing it, which necessitates education on the phenomenon. Deliberate action should then be undertaken to stimulate meaningful progress. as represented by the right panel. There is no question that growth is a necessary element to a fulfilling life and the very reason that we humans work and advance our societies. As such, complacency must go and action must continue.

批改：能够提出自己的建议，起到了总结和再次呼应主题的作用。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：18/20

内容切题，全面的描绘出了图画中的内容。词汇方面，无拼写错误；句式方面，注意句子结构的完整连贯；语法方面，语法基础还不错。逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。

修改建议：可以看出作文完成的非常认真，无论是内容的充分性还是语言的逻辑结构都特别的清晰，值得表扬，继续加油。

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