2019年考研英语二大作文真题与例文批改

一篇高分的考研英语大作文，常常具备结构清晰、句式多变、词汇地道三大特点。本文精解的2019年考研英语二批改范例，每一段都体现了这三大要素，启航教育考研英语二作文真题教研组对该范文进行了详细的亮点标注。

一、2019年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2019年大作文48. Directions: Write an essay based on the chart below. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments. You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2019年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts the different choices of graduates at a certain university in 2013 and 2018. In 2013,the percentage of graduates who chose enjoy job was 68.1%,but by 2018,this rate had substantially decreased to 60.7%. In contrast ,the number of those who chose to chose further education experienced a significant increase of 7.7%during the same period .Simultaneously,the percentage of those who chose start their own business remained stable and steady .

The core reason for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows .To start with ,as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes,our government has made tremendous efforts to build a sound education system ,enabling university students to have an ample opportunities for further education .In addition,as the saying goes ,“our life’s stage,pressure is always present.”university students are compelled to confront immense employment pressure ,and as a result ,pursuing further education had emerged as their reluctant choice . What about future trends ? I am confident that the proportion of graduates who chose to pursue futher education and start their own business will steadily increase in the following decades .In contrast ,the proportion of those who choose employment will likely continue to decrease .

三、考研英语作文批改

批改：语法正确

原文：enjoy job

批改：choose to do sth,或者此处直接加名词，改为 employment

原文： number

批改：改为 proprotion

原文：chose

批改：删去

原文：start

批改：choose to do sth, 改为 to start

批改：开头段表达不错，清晰地阐述了图表内容

批改：语法正确

原文：an

批改：删去 an, opportunities 是复数，此处矛盾了

原文：our

批改：改为 On

原文：university

批改：首字母大写

批改：此处写为第二段，内容表达很好，也很具体

原文：chose

批改：此处用一般现在时，改为 choose

批改：结尾段内容表达很好

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：12分/ 15分

题目要求：总体上来说是切题的，表明的个人观点与图表的内容是贴合的

语言表达：存在几处语法问题，词汇表达不错，一些句式表达也很好

结构逻辑：文章的结构完整清晰，内容也比较丰富具体

修改建议：1. 语法问题结合作文批注仔细修改，要细心 2. 首字母大小写要规范，之后可以多积累素材，自己多练练句子，进一步丰富自己的句式和观点储备，提高自己的语言表达，总的来说写的不错，加油！

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