2015年考研英语二大作文真题与例文批改

启航教育考研英语教研组精心筛选了2015年考研英语二大作文真题原文及高分批改范例。本篇范文中，老师对每一句都给出修改建议，是考研英语二大作文备考资料库中的精品，特别推荐给参加2027考研的学子。

一、2015年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2015年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments. You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2015年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The pie chart clearly displays the percentage breakdown of different expenses during the Spring Festival among residents in our country"s certain city. The New Year"s presents take the lead at 40% .Additionally, factors such as transportation, gather eating, and others are also considered, accounting for 20%.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, against the backdrop of our country"s rapid and dynamic develop ment, the younger generation, particularly those born in the 1990s and 2000s,are accustomed to giving presents in the Spring Festival and have become the primary consumer group. In addition, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes , our government has made tremendous efforts to build a sound transportation system,enabling people to come back home in the Spring Festival easily.Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

What about future trends? I am confident that the above statistical figures accurately and truthfully reflect the choices of people in the Spring Festival, serving as a microcosm of the changes in the era, and will likely remain relatively stable in the following decades.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：ather eating

批改：gatherings and eating

原文： 20%

批改：加个respectively，每样都占比20%。。或者accounting for a combined 60%。

原文：The pie chart clearly displays the percentage breakdown of different expenses during the Spring Festival among residents in our country"s certain city. The New Year"s presents take the lead at 40% .Additionally, factors such as transportation, gather eating, and others are also considered, accounting for 20%.

批改：开头描述非常清晰

原文：develop ment

批改：development

原文：in

批改：during，在...期间

原文： come back home in the

批改：​return home easily during

原文：The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, against the backdrop of our country"s rapid and dynamic develop ment, the younger generation, particularly those born in the 1990s and 2000s,are accustomed to giving presents in the Spring Festival and have become the primary consumer group. In addition, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes , our government has made tremendous efforts to build a sound transportation system,enabling people to come back home in the Spring Festival easily.Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

批改：词汇和语法结构丰富

原文：in

批改：during

原文：in

批改：of

原文：What about future trends? I am confident that the above statistical figures accurately and truthfully reflect the choices of people in the Spring Festival, serving as a microcosm of the changes in the era, and will likely remain relatively stable in the following decades.

批改：good

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：11/15分。

1.作文内容包含全面，主题明确，层次分明；

2.运用复杂的语法结构和高级词汇，定语从句，非谓语结构和宾语从句句型很棒；

3.采用恰当的衔接手法，内容较为连贯；

4.要多内化老师讲的高分词汇和模板句型，形成自己的语料库和写作思路，加油！

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