2019年考研英语一大作文批改，附真实批改案例

备考考研英语，作文占了30分(英语二25分)。很多同学背了模板、练了十几篇，分数却一直上不去——根本原因是没人帮你指出具体错误。以下是考生2019年考研英语大作文例文，包含作文得分、作文纠错与批改，大家可以对照看看，这些问题你是不是也在犯。

2019年考研英语大作文(学生原文)

Clearly and accurately, the survey results in relation to the graduates of a certain college will do in the future have been presented in the diagram. Specifically speaking, from 2013 onward, what stands out most is that participating in jobs in 2013 and 2018, participating in jobs initially 68.1% has changed to 60.7% in 2018, while going on colleges, by contrast, has witnessed a obvious changed,expanding from 26.3% to 34.0%. However, creating jobs changed unremarkably from 1.3% to 2.6% and it's the smallest proportion relatively.

The above trend can be attributed to a large number factors, the most critical and influential factor, I deem, lies in the goverment's strong promotion of livelihood improvements in recent years, which has laid a foundation for graduate’s bright future and attracted increasing public attention. Another key factor should now be overlooked is that going jobs early can receive earning early and exercise themselves in the society, in turn, enables students to broaden their horizons and increase their practical skills, thereby contributing to the growing popularity of this phenomenon. Therefore, the chart seemingly depicts an inevitable phenomenon with potentially profound societal impact.

Based on the analysis, it is reasonable to conclude that this phenomenon is bound to remain prevalent in the next few years. But I think we should continue to track these datas so that we can make timely identification and collect ion of issues.

作文得分：15/20

作文批语：

你的写作水平很好~要注意复杂句和高级词汇的使用，用地道词汇和短语扩充文章内容哦~

语法：使用简单句表达观点时偶尔出现语法错误，再接再厉!

词汇：选用较高级词汇时有拼写错误;词汇很丰富，用词很准确，超厉害!

结构：能够灵活使用多种衔接手段，超厉害!

批注：

考研英语作文没有捷径，但有更高效的练习方法。与其盲目写10篇没人看，不如认真写1篇、改透1篇。

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